atariel lossehelin

oh my gosh I absolutely adore this poem... "off death-dates shunned." that line kind of messed up the flow... Other than that, none of the lines really bothered me flow-wise.

Bravo! The rhythm and rhyming were spectacular. I found the poem rather amusing in a disturbing way. And though I find cannibalism (hope I spelled that right) to be a ...

nah, I know you're not trying to criticize or anything.

I actually liked the way you repeated the title every time. Just my personal opinion on that one. So anyway, I absolutely loved the it!

Wow.. someone loved it! Amazing... thx :)

Lol and hi to Ed. And to my lovely friend, what have you been telling them??? Lolz. And you're completely entitled to your opinion, poet or not. And you could ...